TB Pg: The Letter

"The Letter" revolves around a small section of the story where I wanted Lena's previous master, Artious Gale to have a messenger send a letter to her new home (Jorris Pyril's HQ where he is training her) and the letter involves a detailed explanation about how screwed she is. It also involves a word I really wanted to be like "pins and needles" for Jorris: Stupid. Stupid is a word that I was told I was when I was a little kid and it's been a very hurtful word when referring to a child who is innocent.

Jorris is the guy with the cigarette and although I don't smoke it's like a characteristic for Jorris. He can't die although he tries to make himself as unhealthy as humanly possible to feel like he's truly dieing. Lena's expression is hidden in this scene for various reasons. I want the reader to feel as if she is crying. But is she really hurt by the letter?

This is going in my portfolio for the art competition.

Story: "Two of One Blood: The Story of Lena Rippenson."
Characters: Lena Rippenson and Jorris Pyril.